AlcarazFV

hello!!! I returned, after a long time of inactivity. I have already published the first chapter of my new story: A flame about to go out. I published it first in Spanish, since it is easier for me to write that way, but if I see that there is support, I will make the effort to bring the chapters in English. Thank you very much and I hope you read it and like it! happy new year 2025!
          	
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          	hola!!! volví, después de mucho tiempo inactivo. Ya publique el primer capítulo de mi nueva historia: Una llama a punto de extinguirse. lo publique primero en español, ya que para mi es mas facil escribir asi, pero si veo que hay apoyo, hare el esfuerzo para traer los capítulos en ingles. Muchas gracias y espero que la lean y les guste! feliz año 2025!

AlcarazFV

hello!!! I returned, after a long time of inactivity. I have already published the first chapter of my new story: A flame about to go out. I published it first in Spanish, since it is easier for me to write that way, but if I see that there is support, I will make the effort to bring the chapters in English. Thank you very much and I hope you read it and like it! happy new year 2025!
          
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          hola!!! volví, después de mucho tiempo inactivo. Ya publique el primer capítulo de mi nueva historia: Una llama a punto de extinguirse. lo publique primero en español, ya que para mi es mas facil escribir asi, pero si veo que hay apoyo, hare el esfuerzo para traer los capítulos en ingles. Muchas gracias y espero que la lean y les guste! feliz año 2025!

AlcarazFV

Hello how are you??? Today I uploaded the last chapter of my story!!! Maybe later I'll do some special ones, but for now I don't know. I have other projects in mind, related to two famous animes, but that will come later!! Thanks to those who were reading the story chapter after chapter!!!

AlcarazFV

@ BlackFlashYuto  thank you so much!! Soon I will announce what the new story will be about!
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BlackFlashYuto

@AlcarazFV It was a good story. It was fun while it lasted. Good job. Hope to see your next work.
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AlcarazFV

@ BlackFlashYuto  Hey bro, how are you? Look, if I'm honest, the truth is that I'm not much of a writer either haha, so my opinion is simply someone else's. Maybe I would tell you to take into account all the possibilities of the universe you are writing about. I mean, if you are going to make your protagonist have that technique, you are going to have to adapt the other characters as well so that they can be on par. That is, it would not be the Storyshift universe as such, but perhaps one **Based** on Storyshift. Outside of that, the truth is I don't have much to contribute, I'm sorry.

BlackFlashYuto

I must say, I'm enjoying the storyshift story. At first I had given up due to how Sera was weak. (Curious why Sera, is it a shortcut for Seraphim?) but I continued and I started enjoying it and now I wonder what will happen. Just waiting for next chapter, this cliffhanger got me.

BlackFlashYuto

@AlcarazFV It,s cool, thanks. The slightest to tips help. Well, time to get brainstorming
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BlackFlashYuto

@AlcarazFV 0k, that's good to know, I must have forgotten while waiting for a chapter or something. Can you help with something. I wanted to write a OC story with Storyshift. I have one, 3 chapter in my draft as I have not publised it yet(It's about a guy with the ten shadows technique  and feel that it's not good or that it just won't work. Please help me on this. I feel like I need a bit of advice to improve since i am not happy with my writing. If you're interested in helping can see me on discord (Check my bio where it's written about) or you can suggest another way on Conversations. I just need a second opinion on this.
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AlcarazFV

@ BlackFlashYuto  Hello! Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked the story.
             Yes, Sera's name is not implied as such, but his parents referred to him as "Their Angel", this being said in Chapter 3, but they did not want to name him Angel because it was too redundant. So they felt that Sera would be something more special.
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hoifzf

I definitely get that lack of confidence yah know but your doing way better than me when I started writing I wasn't even confident enough to do a fanfic for like a year lol

AlcarazFV

@ hoifzf  thank you! Likewise, it took me a long time to gain confidence. My sister, who also writes here, helped me a lot to believe in myself. For several months I was thinking about the details of the story, and now I am putting them down, with a little improvisation, but nothing more haha
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