CrystalM1384
Hi! Thank you for adding Out of the Shadows to your list!
CrystalM1384
@Allium_Roseum i really appreciate your input! Thank you so much. I will take it into consideration.
Allium_Roseum
@CrystalM1384 heyyy, i thought it was good! your writing style is nice, takes the reader away, right into the story. But I couldnt finish the fic (i read like half of it) because your writing style made the characters sound quite young. which made me (as an 18 year old) a lil uncomfy. I do hope u do something with your talent in the future though!