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Guys, my chapters get a bit better as I go along so don't give up once you read the first chapter. Also give me more feedback guys! I need it badly!

I am also considering making it the first book of a trilogy.

Well...it's been a rocky start for this book and I was wondering if maybe you could give me some feedback on it. What to change to make it better. Compliments. Tips.

What do you guys think?