⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Bottling up my life)
Although I'm not sure who the author of this story is since I also read it in Web Novel by "Azeneth2523", but it is definitely one of the best perspectives, only below the versions of Severus by the author "Shadow7Blue" in WN, although I like much more the pairings of this story, I always believed that Sev and Bella would have had compatibility for the dark arts without the need of joining Voldy, although I would not like Andy to follow the same fate of being repudiated by her family, since I consider that her future husband behaved just as cowardly as Remus when abandoning his wife and daughter, when their wives were in greater danger in comparison. On the other hand, the other possible pairings like Lily, Hermione, Jade, Katie, Deyaneira, etc, could be left in the background or as concubines, considering that they do not share his passions, but since it is in that time, I would like more interaction with the women who in the canonical line were already married women like Madame Rosmerta, Lady Zabini, Pandora Lovegood, Apolline Delacour, Amelia Bones, etc.
As for the overall plot, it would be convenient if Severus could enhance his body or magical core using potions or simply use "Felix Felicis" and take advantage of his ability to fly without the need for a broomstick to humiliate Voldy, not to mention that he should also distrust Dumbledore, considering how overly manipulative he was with him and Harry until the end.
P.S: I plan to follow the story until the end, so I will wait for the next chapter. Although in case the scenes become too explicit to Wattpad + , it would be advisable to have a backup copy on AO3.
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