@aquanara alright and thankyou, i wouldnt mind at all. seeing as how i need some help also and an opinion. mine are only a couple chapters also. Alana the curious, has two chapters and Ruthless Mercy has an epilogue... : )
Hello! i saw you about critiquing, turns out i need a crtique and im new here too! haha, its only the first two chapters (or the first one because the second one isn't edited, but if you don't mind grammar mistakes, then please do!) i will be sure to pm (personal message) you a critique soon, thanks!