@GrayLivingstone I've finished the story. I've replaced your story from Nit have read yet to Rate: 8. I put uner 8 only because 1. It took 11 days for me to get pass the first chapter, I Stull couldn't and had to completely skip it (my own opinion not the same fir everyone) I feel like the first chapter just had too much going on and I couldn't figure out who was who exactly and what they looked like exactly it felt all over the place. (Again, just my thoughts, everyone has different reading and writing styles.) 2ndly, in my opinion I had to do alot of stopping and reading because I would get lost at who is speaking at the moment I wouldn't know if it was still Rea speaking or if it transitioned to Haleys speaking and thought process, however as I continued reading I had spotted your style in telling who is speaking what. Who is thinking what, and who deserves their ass getting handed to them. Once I figured that out reading the story went smoothly. OVERALL! I absolutely enjoyed the story, perfect amount of tension not too dramatic and not too boring maybe a bit too quickly but not something too concerning. Your effort in this is truly appreciated, thank you for your creativity.