hi nikki! thank you for the follow and for your support on 9:12, your comments were so flattering and they helped me a lot, my words cannot explain how grateful I am for this. and in answer to your question on the first chapter, the repetitive use of 'cuts' were for effect but I understand why it may have jagged the flow a bit so I'll definitely edit that when I get to it! thank you for pointing out all my (usually hilarious and totally silly) mistakes hahaha! But I really do appreciate it, readers like you are a blessing. <3
