AngelinaKiss

@AceAstren thank you! <3

becca_52

You have a good eye for detail and atmosphere, but I agree with another post in that it needs tweeking...But I think you know that. And when I post my own up,I shall be told the same thing lol. It's a good start and I wish the best for you.
          
          Remember if you believe in your story, your characters then others will too. Keep persevering.
          
          Bec