AngelinaKiss

@AceAstren thank you! <3

becca_52

You have a good eye for detail and atmosphere, but I agree with another post in that it needs tweeking...But I think you know that. And when I post my own up,I shall be told the same thing lol. It's a good start and I wish the best for you.
          
          Remember if you believe in your story, your characters then others will too. Keep persevering.
          
          Bec

DemelzaCarlton

Thank  you for choosing to become one of my fans, @AngelinaKiss. Good luck with your nightmares - mine tend to keep me up at night, one way or another. Tonight...I suspect will be one of those, for tomorrow's Friday and a new Nightmare is scheduled to go live...