Hello! I recently updated my chapters. I deleted my introduction chapter because I kinda found it useless and unentertaining, also because I wanted the readers to find out their relationships and personality themselves while they read the fanfic, I find that more interesting and creative on their part. I changed the fanfic to mostly second-person point-of-view instead of first-person so it can be easier for the reader to put themselves in the story and relate to it better. I'm working on improving my writing style, so I also added more details and changed some choice of words. I hope this makes it easier to read, I'm planning to write Ray x reader one-shots so if you have any recommendations or suggestions whether it's my fanfic or one-shots, let me know!
