Anna96

Hello,
          	Your book is extremely well written and I really liked your use of medieval language for the monk my only criticism (and it is picky) is the part that said "get stuffed" it seemed, if anything clumsy. A part from that can't wait till you introduce the main lady, I hope there is one - I'll add it to my reading list!!!!!

RobThier

@Anna96 It's perfectly all right if you don't like the 'get stuffed' :) Whether or not to mix such language with medieval language ( like the monks ) is a really a matter of personal taste.
          
          Great to hear that you enjoyed my story! If you want to get automatic notices when new chapters come out, you could fan me, I love having fans :)
          
          Kind Regards
          
          Robert
          
          P.S: When you've continued your story, tell me, and I'll be glad to leave you a comment again. And, by the way, a little technical tip: If you reply to messages on wattpad, hit the 'reply' button under the message you want to reply to before typing your answer. That way, the other person will be notified about your reply. If you don't do that, you'll have to wait for your answer until that person accidently drops by on your message board again :)

Anna96

Hello,
          Your book is extremely well written and I really liked your use of medieval language for the monk my only criticism (and it is picky) is the part that said "get stuffed" it seemed, if anything clumsy. A part from that can't wait till you introduce the main lady, I hope there is one - I'll add it to my reading list!!!!!

RobThier

Hi!
          First a  litle technical tip: when you reply to somebody's message, click on the 'reply' button under the message you want to answer before typing your reply. That way, I'll be notified about your answer, and you  don't have to wait for days till I accidently drop by on your profile again :)
          
          I've left you a comment on your story. ave you had a chance to look at mine yet?
          
          Kind Regards
          
          Robert

RobThier

Hi!
          I see you're looking for people to read and comment on your book? So am I :) It's my first english book (Im from Germany) and I would really be interested whether it can compete with the writing of native speakers:
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2601623-well-dead
          Awaiting your comment eagerly! Have put your story on my reading list already :)
          Kind Regards
          Robert