AnneBerry

New book series The Golden. ‍♀️‍♂️

marjakuusi

@AnneBerry ooh, the rewritten beginning is better!! The story goes straight to action! Even though I sort of also liked the more relaxed pacing of the first version, I can't wait for more!! (Btw, for me Wattpad showed that you'd had posted the 5th chapter in 1970 )
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AnneBerry

New book series The Golden. ‍♀️‍♂️

marjakuusi

@AnneBerry ooh, the rewritten beginning is better!! The story goes straight to action! Even though I sort of also liked the more relaxed pacing of the first version, I can't wait for more!! (Btw, for me Wattpad showed that you'd had posted the 5th chapter in 1970 )
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louis_debora

Honestly, your writing pulled me in instantly. The flow is so clean and the emotions hit naturally. It just feels good to read. Keep going, this is really something.

louis_debora

@AnneBerry The way you describe your characters is really striking. Do you keep any visual references or concept designs posted somewhere?
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