Problematic.Writings

How would you guys feel if I posted my short story? And would you want it in parts or just as one?

Come look at my first project! https://www.wattpad.com/story/223422299

Ay bro...u should like actually write a story...just cause
          
                                                               ~I Đ⁰ŇƏ ĐİĐĐÏŁÝ BƏĞÖŇƏĐ

HOI