Annie_H589

imagespan@GiorgiaRifaldi Well,it's interesting.You have talent,so don't waste it.And you have very long chapters.But to me it's too long and then it's boring,because it seems to me like you're writing about one thing over and over.Don't take this as a hate it's just mine opinion and my books aren't any better.So keep writing because with any other chapter u will be better and better ;)

Annie_H589

imagespan@GiorgiaRifaldi Well,it's interesting.You have talent,so don't waste it.And you have very long chapters.But to me it's too long and then it's boring,because it seems to me like you're writing about one thing over and over.Don't take this as a hate it's just mine opinion and my books aren't any better.So keep writing because with any other chapter u will be better and better ;)