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Im waiting for tomorrow to start posting chapters I already prepared, because tomorrow is technically the start of school holidays and I want to rest since the last day of school, which is today for me, has been... A little rough
Also, why whenever I hear or read the word 'Ditto', my mind always associates with Queen Elizabeth(The battleship not the carrier or the former queen)
Also if you want to improve your writing style. The only advice I can give (because I am too) is to find your voice.
Find YOUR own specific writing style, to the point that if I read a chapter and I have to guess 4 authors multiple choice style on who wrote it. I can choose the one who wrote it (in this case, you).
So my writing style?
I would say... Me. Like. What I would say, especially in my rewritten book, you know? If you haven't checked it out the narrator is a menace.
So... It's hard to write. But do you get the gist of it?
Being neutral is... Almost impossible...
I've been trying to find loopholes but all I can do is... Military aide disguised as humanitarian aide.
@Annotation3567a Okay okay this is experimental. Just a funny idea. BUT. What if, like, I've been experimenting with "neutrality" Because. It is natural to help, BUT... if your faction is neutral, if you help one side... You have to help the other, and you can also gain moral high ground. But then. If said neutral faction is strong... Don't you think one side is gonna want it? So... If you want to stay neutral you shouldn't choose... But then that circles back to morality. If you don't choose, you stay true to your words, but someone dies. And their blood will be on your hands But if you do choose... Someone will still die, and you're not neutral anymore and blah blah blah. So... That might be pretty fun to explore... But also challenging, again this is merely experimental. Just an idea. Like. "I wanna help everyone equally uwu" sounds wholesome until you realize it's just dooming yourself to eternal guilt trips. help side A? cool, now side B hates you and escalates, more bodies drop. help side B to "balance"? side A retaliates harder, bodies STILL drop but now you're the hypocrite who picked anyway. Soo. To say the least. It's a very hard idea but... It's pretty darn fun, it doesn't have to be perfect. And honestly I am still exploring the concept of "neutrality" myself. But that's the gist of it
@Zack342_34 And thats why I admire you, keep up the good work mate, and thanks for the advice! Also, I am gonna ask for your opinion on something. How should I rewrite the Neutral New Faction. Because Im planning to remake it to have Modern PLAN Kansens roaming around to make it more interesting. What do you think?
I think Ill actually post a poll on the book, so you guys can vote on characters would you like to have in the new version
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Ill be rewriting two books completely
The Hero of Jutland Sails Again, and, unfortunately(tho fortunately for me to test my somewhat new writing style), The Neutral New Faction.
I actually have no idea what to do with The Hero of Jutland sails again, I might actually be tempted to canceled it and replace it with some other idea I brew up in my head. Since I am suprisingly eager to write(albeit slowly) now.
The Neutral New Faction... Hooo.... Weehhh... This is a simple one.
I. Do. Not. Like. ANY. Of the ships in that book, all of them, by my design terms of ships, are either
°Too short hulled
°Too thin and tall
°Hilariously Bad Quality(Looks)
°Too unrealistic(Partially on the designs, not so much the armaments)
I have formed to become really picky with some of my older design works, whether to modernize them or not. Even in the list of ships I plan to add on Project 120888(Ill try to keep it small. Promise), some of the ships, I completely just got fed up and just, scrapped their idea completely(And their model in my MC world)
Instead, Ill rewrite the book, completely, this time tho, I have my head set on actually rewriting it. Downscaling the amount of characters from a billion to just 1. Scharnhorst, tho Ill probably go ahead and maybe add more. Maybe the whole class actually, tho their design, remind me, it will be different.
See you all soon! Love you all.
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@Annotation3567a HAHAHHAHAHA DUDE THAT'S TORTURE! Like that's sooool time consuming.... Especially if you want it symmetrical- And thanks bud!
@Zack342_34 Oh if only I can put someone through removing water from the entire ship's length worth of internal space, then undo and redo some stuff for such things as 'Im redoing the boy because I dont want it to look like an Icebreaker bow or a metal and fancier version of what you would see in Trafalgar. But seriously, your one of my favorite followers, keep up your work mate, I appreciate your help! :)
@Annotation3567a Dude... I have NEVER met a person that DOES MINECRAFT 1:1 BUILDS OF THEIR CHARACTERS. I have never seen that, and that takes DEDICATION. And the only thing I would suggest is your writing style can be improved. BUT, this is way more important. As I said before. Protect your motivation and inspiration... But if your asking of the quality of your book? 7.8/10
Is Project 120888 discontinued?
@Annotation3567a tho I do have a chapter in preparation for release sometime after this
@gshsjsbshs no! Not at all, Im just really lazy. Tho some of my other books are canceled
I just came out a bath, raining outside, and thought to myself...
"Hm, what about writing another story, Azur Lane story of course"
But how do I make it unique..?
Ah I know!
Isekai the most "normal" acting person I know. The same one(Spoiler alert) who said...
"What happens in the dark... Comes out in the light."
@Annotation3567a "Isekai the most normal" reading this I ended up laughing because in the game lores originally written by LI and Shuyin Lin the "commander" originally isekaid that's why he has memories about the creators of the sirens and kansens and a world where guidance munitions and drones dominated everything
I miss writing
@Annotation3567a Hehehe I feel ya. It's normal to feel guilty about it but that tells me you care. And that's enough for me!
@Zack342_34 Okay enough, but I feel guilty for my followers(You included) I feel like I have abandoned y'all since I haven't posted in what? 3-4 months? I would like to come back, but as a wise man once said: "Look, when you wake up one day, and your legs just give, and you just cant run anymore..." I would love to write again, but I think I still need to get my energy back again, when that comes? I have no clue.
@Annotation3567a Don't worry. You'll get your chance. Someday. Promise. Anyway how you doing bud?
My phones UI/Android version is so new it cant download Atlantic Fleet..
Shi-
I dont know if the Gentlemen Hilfskreuzer will ever continue, but considering its success and my 'posting schedule'. Ill probably think of something else, a solution.
Happy Independence Day to the Filipinos(And me)
Lets enjoy this day with gratitude and pride for our lovely Phillippines.
LETS ENJOY THIS BEFORE SCHOOL BOYS-
So remember the entry about the Horodyszcze-Class? You know, that entire chapter dedicated to just telling the history about them?(Atleast the origin history)
Yeah, if you watch Drachinifel, yes THAT Drachinifel, then I think you know where I got that idea from.
So if you guys would like it, I would continue to do it, maybe I would even just move it to a new book? Or maybe out of request? Of course if you guys dont like it, then I will just continue writing more story's, I am just going to follow your opinion.
And speaking of Drachinifel inspired 5-minute guide. I am actually(spoiler alert) maybe making one right now, to join another chapter release about the 2nd class of Polish Navy battleships. I think you can already guess who that class is.
Anyways, see you all very soon!(The chapter is like, the middle of being halfway complete to almost done, SPOILER ALERT)
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