Anokhireddy

@SriShay Thank you for your suggestions, SriShay. I'm actually basing my story on my understanding of the Mahabharata from various books I've read. Your ideas are interesting, but they seem to create a significantly different narrative than what I'm aiming for. Essentially, it changes the core story quite a bit.  Once again, thanks for your suggestion and your time for sharing your ideas.I will keep ur suggestions in my mind.

SriShay

@SriShay When Pandavas and Draupadi along with Kunti arrived in Hastinapur, Maharani Gandhari refused to welcome Pandavas along with their common wife Draupadi so did Bhanumathi refused for what Draupadi did in her Swayamvar with Karna and when Pandavas tried to retaliate, Bhanumathi said that Maharaj Pandu and His Wife Madri will be disappointed as well as ashamed of Pandavas, Draupadi for their behavior towards Karna and Kunti for not stopping Pandavas from doing it as Maharaj Pandu and Madri never behaved like the way Pandavas behaved. Maharani Gandhari even stated that Madri will be regretting her decision on giving the responsibility to raise Nakul and Sahdev instead of asking her brother or Maharani Gandhari. 

SriShay

@SriShay Karna also told Duryodhan that Draupadi and her Family especially Draupadi had already decided to whom Draupadi will marry even before the topic of Draupadi's Swayamver came in topic. Even in Swayamver if anyone else has completed the task Draupadi would not have married the person as she had already decided whom to marry and was told about his arrival in her Swayamvar. 

SriShay

Also, don't drag your story at fast pace. Please write your story at a normal pace 

Anokhireddy

@SriShay  Okay, I understand. I will write at a normal pace and avoid rushing the story. Thank you for the feedback.
            
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