Shelley2594

im knda a newbie and it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          i mean im not looking for like 'good work' or 'keep going' because that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

2sweet

HEY:) 
          how are you?? 
          ive uploaded a true story.. which is about a horrible part of my life... 
          its called 'the sweetest lie' 
          ive also entered it for the watty awards.. 
          please read and let me know what you think!! 
          feel free to read the others and comment or reccomend:) 
          and dont worry they're quite short so it wont be time consuming:P 
          
          i will read/vote/fan yours too:) 
          
          thanks:) 
          take care 
          stay blessed:)