@AngelicStilinski okay, youre already contradicting yourself. I told you your protag’s name was inconsistent, and you started off saying “I took what u had to say and will change it up.” Immediately afterwards, you go “whether I name up the name a few times or not doesn’t matter to me.” make up your mind, are you gonna listen to criticism or not..? If you’re worried about what im saying to other people in the comments, I feel like your prioritizes are mixed up. You have literal children in your comments talking about how they fantasize ab duke and being weirdos. If you want your comment section to be not rude or whatever you want, maybe start by telling your very young audience ‘hey maybe don’t throw your sodden panties in my comment section?’ maybe then people, including myself, would start acting with more decency. the people in YOUR comments are people YOU attract, so start there.