hi @areyki14 !!! una sa lahat, congratulations dahil isa ka sa napakaraming talented Filipino writers. Although hindi pa naman gaanong outstanding yung works mo, okay lang yan! Kasi, nahahasa naman yan.
Bale, ang nabasa ko pa lang is yung MFGGF .. Okay naman sya. Kaya lang parang ibang unnecessary lines/reactions na nasasama, making it less exciting. But syempre, you're still young in this industry (naks, maka-industry! hahaha!) kaya hindi naman kita pwedeng asahan na sobrang galing.
Good thing na you are starting to write stories like this. Try mo pabasa sa mga friends mo and hingi ka feedback. Tapos try mo rin magbasa sa gawa ng iba. Ganun kasi ginagawa ko tapos I try to compare my works sa iba. Makakakuha ka ng hints kung paano gawing swabe ang isang story.
Tapos, minsan nakakatulong din yung alignments, punctuation marks, and spacing. Although nakita ko naman na ina-acknowledge mo yung mga typos mo, I still want to say it. Mehehe ^_^
I'm not a professional story reviewer. Gusto ko lang magbasa and magbigay ng reaction regarding sa nabasa ko. Kasi it really helps na may nakakausap ka either sa Wattpad or sa Google+ world. And I want to be that person :)
I hope this simple act will inspire you to continue what you are passionate about. Keep the fire burning, gurl!!!
~Althea ❤
