ArsynIsLost_
Currently having a lot of thoughts about rewriting Remembrance before I post anything more regarding Deadly Deceit. The main reason behind these thoughts is because of the lack of worldbuilding, underdeveloped characters, and plot holes within Remembrance. I also generally do not like the format that I wrote Remembrance in. I've been thinking about rewriting it purely in Belial's perspective, and how he views Westburn as a town. The main reason I choose him is because he is a very important character when it comes to the plot. It also simply goes well with the fact that Deadly Deceit is going to be within his daughter's perspective. This is a very late night thought, which is why I am posting this, because I want to know y'all's thoughts on it.