Art3mis369

I've been working on all of this art for years, so I figured it's about time I published some of it lol https://www.wattpad.com/story/112472159

m_ibrahim345

Hey @Art3mis369! I just read the first chapter of The Queen of the Shadows and I have to say I'm totally in love with ur writing. It is so brilliant, captivating and detailed! Thoroughly enjoyed reading QoS and would definitely be going through more of ur collection. 
          BTW it would mean the world to me if u could take our some time to give my book a read https://my.w.tt/lZSVM1Xlc7
          Ur professional opinion would be a great support for me. :-):-) 
          Thanks,
          Stay blessed today and always

AayushiTiwari

I'm new to the writing stuffs can you please help me with it.
          I have just started writing a story SWORDCROSS SCHOOL, it is a fantasy. Can please recommended me how to write.

AayushiTiwari

@Art3mis369 Thank you for helping me I will try to use the recommendations ☺☺
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Art3mis369

@AayushiTiwari ok, so I reviewed your story and I have a few things to recommend. When writing dialogue, it's important to know that the dialogue in most cases is supposed to sound like actual people talking. Putting the names in front of the sentences being spoken is unnecessary. Enough context clues should be given to the reader, so they will know who is saying what. Correct usage of spacing between words, and quotation marks need to be used more frequently with dialogue as well. Plot needs more development. Characters need more development. That's all I really have to say. This is just my constructive criticism, so please don't take it personally. :)
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Art3mis369

@AayushiTiwari I'm not entirely an expert at writing myself.  But I can try to give you some advice. What is it about writing that you find the most difficult? Like story wise, plot, character development and depth? I can read over your story and critique it if you'd like me to.
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