Ashayera

Published new chapter of my two ongoing books if you haven't checked it out already do check out ...

Ashayera

I genuinely need to ask for your honest opinion on something important. Does my practice of inserting comments within my stories detract from the reading experience? I recently encountered a comment suggesting that these interjections are bothersome, prompting me to seek your perspectives. While I've incorporated my personal observations and punchlines into my narratives for quite some time, and it's not a new practice for me, your feedback is genuinely valued.

Ashayera

I genuinely need to ask for your honest opinion on something important. Does my practice of inserting comments within my stories detract from the reading experience? I recently encountered a comment suggesting that these interjections are bothersome, prompting me to seek your perspectives. While I've incorporated my personal observations and punchlines into my narratives for quite some time, and it's not a new practice for me, your feedback is genuinely valued.

AartiMerchant

@Ashayera  I will start by saying that I enjoy your stories and look forward to you completing the ongoing works so that I can start reading them. As for your question: I think it is subjective and even for the same reader there are times when this would be fine and times when this wouldn't be fine. So, the best course of action, in my opinion, would be to categorize the feedback, do a percentage check and see how you want to take it from there; because, at the end of the day, this is about changing your style of writing and it requires proper and serious delibration before you do anything. *Disclaimer* I do not mean to tell you what to do, I simply wanted to share what I normally do when I am in a similar situation, either at work or in private life.
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InkOfWinter

@Ashayera not at all it makes the story more interesting because we get to see what is running in your mind while you are writing all the stories
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Ruby134

@Ashayera noooo it's amazing. It's what makes your story's unique and i like reading them they are soo funny and they make me burst out laughing when I wake up or come back from a long day and see you posted a new chapter it's makes my day better so no don't stop writing them please ❤️❤️❤️
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Mounika709

 Mam I think you forget to update everyone hearing my thoughts story please if you don't mind update as we are waiting

Mounika709

That more like it 😜
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Ashayera

@Mounika709 haha I didn't...I was kinda busy these days had no time to write ...I will give crazy updates soon
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