@Catherine_Rose123 I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thanks for the feedback. I dont know when I will update the next chapter as I have a totally mess up schedule.
And yes about your request, I will try my best to improve story and make it longer.
@AshlynnCordelia I have read your story that you published today. It's exciting. When will you update the next chapter? I am eager to see it. And two requests
1) Please give these characters faces if you know what I mean
2) Please write your chapters a little bit longer