Atlantic_Lover06

Thank you all for 150 followers!!! ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂)⸝♡

Cofifidi765

@Atlantic_Lover06 hello author
          Here's some of the changes that you could do in this new remake version of your mlb story :
          
          1) you could change the idea of the mc having bad parents into giving her good parents instead (because we already have enough bad parents for the show like Gabriel , Chloe mother ....) 
          
          2) you could make the other Isekaied guy (like mc) start as an antagonist to mc (that unlike mc he see this world as fiction & not real) before slowly starting to realize that this world is real & the people in it are real as well (after mc succeed in giving him a reality check) as the story progress 
          
          3) as for the powers/abilities of the Akumatized victim's you could change there powers for example :
          →example A : changing Dark Cupid powers from this"shooting people with arrows that turn their feelings of love & friendship into hate" into this "shooting explosive arrows"
          → example B : changing Stoneheart power from this "a big guy made of rocks" into this "a big guy made of rocks that have a weak version of earth manipulate"
          
          (You get the idea author)
          
          4) you could make this miraculous story world as a crossover world that's fused with multiple different other shows like (Powerpuff girls , robotboy , My Life as a Teenage Robo ...) this way the story will have access to other villains for you to use instead of just using Akumatized victim's
          
          5) you could use my hero academia show system about hero work & use something similar to it in this story 
          
          Let me know your opinion about this author

Cofifidi765

@Atlantic_Lover06  
            Here's a list of things that you could add/keep in this rewrite version of this story :
            
            1)- mc reaching (Adrian, Chloe,lila) & changing there lives to a better path
            
            2)- mc giving Marinette a reality check about her behaviors (that will cause Marinette to change to the better)
            
            3)- mc meeting the miraculous guardian early (before the start of ep 1 event) which lead to mc fighting normal crimes & other problems (spider Gwen style) using her fox miraculous (before the start of ep 1 events)
            *[Note : this will explain why in the story both Marinette & Adrian in ep 1 are following mc because she was a hero before them & she have experience in the hero work]*
            
            4)-mc could use the lessons/trainings that she could remember from watching MHA to help her miraculous team (ladybug,cat noir, queen bee ....) at being better heroes 
            
            5)-mc being the one that recruit Chloe to her hero team as queen bee by giving her the bee miraculous
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Cofifidi765

@Atlantic_Lover06 
            5) no i was talking about using MHA hero suits + gadgets system (instead of the miraculous hero suits looking just like sleep clothes meme) since I'm pretty sure the miraculous magic should be capable of giving them a magical version of MHA hero suits + gadgets
            
            4) understandable
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Atlantic_Lover06

Hello! Thank you for you’re suggestions for the re-write. ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ
            
            1) I’m already planning to make slight changes to the mc’s relationships with her parents because it made no sense in the other book. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
            
            2) I love this idea!
            
            3) I like the idea to make the ‘villains’ more powerful but I suck at writing fighting scenes as it is so I doubt I’ll be able to do it justice. (ᵕ—ᴗ—)
            
            4) I more than likely won’t be adding this to my story but thank you for suggesting it. 
            
            5) Like with the ranking of heroes?
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Detectivegel

Are you still doing poppy playtime chapter? It's amazing

Lylacoco

@ Atlantic_Lover06  I hope u update poppy playtime too, I miss it very much. As much as your MLB stories
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Atlantic_Lover06

Thank you! And yes, it is still being continued (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶) ‹
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dayanthony011

Hey there

dayanthony011

Ok
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Atlantic_Lover06

@dayanthony011 Sorry for the late reply, I like the idea but i probably won’t be doing another TMNT book for awhile since I’ve only just started writing one. Thank you for the story request tho!! (´｡• ◡ •｡`) ♡
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dayanthony011

No, three original women and a OC could get more focus and meet the turtles with Tengen, do you think both characters mirror each other’s personalties?
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Atlantic_Lover06

I’ve started a new book. Should I have done this? Absolutely not, but did I still choose to do it? Hell yeah! 
          
          Question though, do I publish it? Hmm~ temptation, temptation.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Lylacoco

@ Atlantic_Lover06  Well I do wish to now which book u will publish......But I also need an Update for the Miraculous and Poppy Playtime Book. They're My favorite so far
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all_hail31

mlb?author..

Atlantic_Lover06

Hello! Unfortunately, I haven’t had any inspiration to write my mlb book recently, and I don’t want to force myself to write a whole chapter only for it to turn out rubbish. I’m rewatching some episodes, so hopefully I’ll get inspired again soon.
            
            Thank you for patiently waiting! (❀´ ˘ `❀)
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