I've been a writer for nineteen years and these are the first stories that I am sharing with anyone.  I encourage you to read them and offer some feedback on what you think I can do to improve the stories so far, or what you think will come next.
Is there anything you would add or change?  I'm looking for constructive criticism, a raw outside opinion on my stories, not just "I liked it."  That means you didn't read it. 😂