AutodidacticApe

Hello! If it's ok, I'd love to take you up on your offer of constructive criticism. I'm a new user and I just published a short poem. It's not sci-fi or fantasy, but it's a quick read and I'd really appreciate honest feedback on it! 

Hello, didn't see your message until now about twisted stories.
          Inside the Mind of Stephen King is a study in where ultimate evil comes from. Kylie's Song is sick and twisted, and DW Subdivision is a small part of my second novel im working on. It is my life project. Let me know what you think.

Thanks so much for adding Long May Men Have Voices to your reading list. I'll be uploading a couple more chapters later today. I hope you enjoy them. :)

Hey crazy person~~I enjoyed your profile page. It's always a treat to encounter a new form of neurosis. And thanx for whipping my little monogram, "The Dark Side of the Hedge" up to your Top Shelf. I've decided to follow you . . . only because I'm worried about you. :)
          ~~Califia

So I am taking a hiatus from my novel. So don't expect any updates anytime soon. 

Thanks for adding Long May Men Have Voices to your reading list. :D It'll be getting regular updates, every week, until the full version is posted. I hope you enjoy it.

6.5k for the Duoy Document. Thank you all for reading and your advice. I know I'm not there yet but given time it will be great read. Best of luck with all your own works. I look forward to reading them all.

Thank you for the follow, and for adding my story to your reading list.

      Ok added a new format to the DUOY DOCUMENT. Being there are so many characters, readers are finding difficulty with the multiple POV changes. This new format eliminates this problem, making it very clear whose POV it is. The transfers between each POV is still very smooth and natural. Making it a fluid read.
          
                 Thank you all for the advice. 

Just wan to say thank you to everyone who has commented on my novel THE DUOY DOCUMENT. I've been listening to all your advice and criticisms. I will be putting it all to good use. Making changes and making thing less confusing, and easier to follow.