Cheyenne

Hello! I was wondering if you could read my story Take Two on Love? And if you would comment on how i should improve it would be great thank you!

@AutumnBlaze Hey, Chey! :D
          
          Yeah and it is been awhile since we had chat so I do not mind to wait for you to reply whenever you are not busy with school too :)
          
          I am good, thanks. And there are a lot of things happens in my life so you might says that I have a lot of things on my plate to keep me busy too :)
          
          Let me see... I am plan to get new mobile soon because my old mobile contact plan is nearly finish it :P
          
          My aunt and uncle is come to visit us from Indonesia on 13th of August to stay with us for 2 weeks. And my aunt is my step dad's sister so that's means more presents from her includes new bed sheet for my bed yay :D 
          
          Also I am going to have big operation on 20th of August and I will be stay at hospital for 1 week half (7 nights and 8 days) so my mother and my sis will share their turns to swing by to visit me whenever it is possible to make sure everything will be ok with me too. Don't worry about me and I will be fine too -hugs -
          
          My cooking skills are getting better and improve it. :)
          
          And I am plan to buy a birthday present for my closest friend, my mother and my lil bro because their birthdays are next month hehe so that's means shopping lol :P
          
          Also I already bought a birthday present for my lil sis last week because her birthday is 11th of July :)
          
          It seems that school keep you busy especially HSC so I hope that everything will gone well for you. And good luck with HSC too -hugs -
          
          I know how you feels and times gone fast right? :P
          
          I hope that shopping, prom and other events will be more fun for you too.
          
          Chey, you are beautiful girl and you do not need to worry about it too much - pat your forehead gentle -
          
          I bet you are going to school week after HSC are you? :P
          
          And I bet that you are look forward to go to Uni too :)
          
          No worries at all and take care always. Keep touch with me whenever you have time too :) xo

@Passionwithwriting5 
          
          Hi Lisa!
          
          It's been ages since we last talked, huh? Haha.
          
          How've you been? What's new for you?
          
          I start my trails for the HSC after next week, haha, which I am so totally looking forward to.
          
          It feels pretty strange being in my last school term, I only have about six weeks left and schools over!
          
          My final assembly's coming up to, I'm hoping to wear a nice skirt and blouse for it, plus I want to dye my hair a proper blond. I dyed my hair blond on the holidays but it came out in a mixture of redish, brownish and blondey...
          
          Even more exciting... my year twelve formal is in November...I know it's super far away for me to be getting all excited about it...but oh well. I'm not a person who likes wearing dresses so it's going to be pretty funny to go shopping for one. I will have to take a tonne of photos since it will be a rare occasion to see me dressed all ladylike.
          
          I'm pretty keen to watch this History channel tv called 'Ancient Aliens' which I know is goin to be painfully far fetched and what not but I'm just a sucker for anything extraterrestrial.
          
          So I've started a health craze today, which I'm hating already, haha, eating healthy and working out is not my cup of tea, but I want to be as pretty as I can be for my formal, and I only have a few months until then so I have to work my butt off, literally, haha.
          
          Right now I'm hanging out down stairs in my house and trying to think of what I want to do...life is so hard... Haha
          
          Anyway, I hope to hear from you soon, fill me in on everything that's been happening :)
          
          BYEEEEEE :D

@AutumnBlaze CHEYENNE! :D x

@AutumnBlaze Hey there, Chey :)
          
          YAY and thanks for let me know about it. Aww thanks and I am glad that you do love it hehe :)
          
          No worries at all and you are welcome too :)
          
          I was going to buy you big teddy bear but I realize it might cost more for mail delivery so next time I will buy big and something special for your Christmas present because you had spoil me with cute stuffs for my Christmas present/birthday present hehe :P
          
          Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so wonderful weekend and it is special for you too :)
          
          Tuna rolls? I want to try it too. Can you ask your mum for recipe of tuna roll please?
          
          Just send the recipe of tuna roll via inbox to me or fb message to me so no one won't steal your mum's recipes hehe :P
          
          Hmmm... You can name your teddy bear after me if you want to :)
          
          I do have a teddy bear and I named him Lee after the main character name Syaoran from Cardcaptor Sakura hehe :P
          
          I usually loses my bookmarks very often so I put the bookmarks into a small box so I won't lose it in the future :P
          
          That's good and I hope that those two assignments goes well for you too :)
          
          And good luck with your assignments too :)
          
          Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I am look forward to see my Christmas present from you soon which means it will be six months from now on hehe :P
          
          No worries at all and you will have plenty time to search for special one for me hehe
          
          No worries at all and anytime for you because you are one of my special friends too :)
          
          Take care and keep touch with me too :) x

@Passionwithwriting5 hi Lisa.
          
          Your present came yesterday so no need to worry that it was lost in the mail :D
          
          Thankyou so much! I love the little teddy, though it is still without a name, though I'm sure I'll come up with something for her soon enough. Its very cute :p
          
          Also, thankyou for the bookmark, I am always losing my bookmarks and i've need a new one for a while. 
          
          I went out with my family for a few drinks and we had a crazy large amount of food at home, Mum made mini pizzas so I could 'relive' my childhood and we also had KFC though by then i was pretty much stuffed and most of the eating was left up to my dad, PLUS we had this awesome thing my mum makes - tuna rolls- trust me, it tastes amazing!
          
          Anyway, I'm doing an assignment now for my cafs class where I have to write a brochure, I've had weeks to work on it but have for some reason left it to today and its due on thursday! Yay for me, plus I have a math assignment due on friday.....life is suck sometimes, haha.
          
          Thanks again for the prezzies and the lovely letter, hopefully I'll be able to find something for you that is totally amazing for chirstmas :D
          
          Talk to you later :)

@AutumnBlaze Hey there, Chey :)
          
          Aww I understand and you are welcome too :)
          
          Hope so and let me know by here or fb message too. Hope that you will like the birthday present hehe :P
          
          Yeah the winter is just start hehe :P
          
          Nothing much and I am just browse the net so I am plan to take my dogs for walks and write new chapters for my stories so I will finish off on the next weekends hehe :P
          
          That's good to know that you do have great time on weekend too. And tell me about it via inbox or fb message about your last weekend hehe :P
          
          Let me see... I am just  spend my time with my family, reading, write and walk with my dogs. Plus watch movies on DVD and tv series hehe :P
          
          No worries at all and take care too. And have fun at school too. Maybe wear something more thick and warm too -hugs - xo

@Passionwithwriting5 Thanks Lisa.
          
          I haven't gotten your letter yet but it will probably have arrived now while I'm at school.
          
          I had a fun weekend and I cant believe I'm so grown up!! Haha
          
          What have you been up to? How was your weekend?
          
          It's freezing at the moment, I hate being outside at the moment because I just keep shaking, it's pretty sad. 
          
          Anyway, I'll talk to you later. :D

@AutumnBlaze Hey Chey. Happy birthday to you and hope that you will enjoy your eighteen birthday today. Have a wonderful day with your family and your friends too. Make your wish comes true too. Enjoy it as you can :)
          
          Sorry for late wishes and take care always :D xo

@AutumnBlaze Hey Chey. That's fine and hope that you will likes the present too :)
          
          You are welcome to read my stories if you want to :)
          
          I know what you means and I usually mix up with bit of cliche hehe :P
          
          Also take your time to edit it and I am look forward to see that you will finish those three stories ASAP too :)
          
          Keep writing and maybe you should get laptop or iPad so it will make it more easier for you when you will attend uni next year too.
          
          Keep touch with me. And take care always :D x