Avanivrinda

Part 17 of Atma Viyog is updated. Hope you will enjoy :)

akkshiiitaa

Hey, I’m Akshita, from team AmbassadorIN, and I had a few small suggestions. The spacing in some sections in your stories could be improved — paragraphs feel a bit long, which can make it harder for readers to stay fully engaged. Shorter paragraphs or a little extra spacing might really help enhance the flow. Your story has great potential, and these tweaks could make the reading experience even smoother!
          I personally enjoy all your stories so few tips from a reader.

Avanivrinda

@akkshiiitaa got it. Thanks :)
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akkshiiitaa

@akkshiiitaa both in app and website
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akkshiiitaa

@akkshiiitaa maybe because the website doesn't have latex so it automatically removes the formatting.
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LekhikaNeeti

Hey, I’m really sorry if I’m totally off the mark here...  I’m not sure if you’re accepting reading requests right now, but it would be so awesome if you gave my book a chance. ✨
          
          If you like it (or if it makes you feel some type of way), go ahead and hit that like button! And seriously—don’t forget to share your thoughts in the comments. I LIVE for those opinions. They matter more than you know! 
          
          Thanks a ton for your time, and I apologize for dropping by like an unexpected plot twist! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400581386?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=LekhikaNeeti