Addict8163

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yo dude I like your stories,but sorry ifi offend you but, your grammar is shit. and also can I try and fix your stories a bit? I aint letting. potentaial fail like that after all

AzukoTEMPEST

@Addict8163 Yo, gang! Thank you for your feedback. When I first wrote that story, I didn't give it much thought. It was just for fun and a silly hobby. I apologize for any inconvenience I caused. I'll try to fix the story in my spare time. Chapter 1,2 and 3 along with the prologue have been fixed. Do tell if any improvements need to be made.
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ScarletSovereign001

The beyonder:Hello,I am searching a friend of mine,he has blue hair,is overpowered and genderless
          
          Do you happen to know his location?

ScarletSovereign001

@ AzukoTEMPEST The Beyonder:Well,Ever since I faked my downfall and exited Marvel Rimuru has been the first friend I made,he has some similarities to Peter Parker but has his own difference...
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AzukoTEMPEST

@apophis2pizza4 
            
            Another: Affirmative,thy friend is where..
            There is No meaning of life,A world of endless suffering The Re:Zero verse..
            
            For you who threatened to destroy Marvels Multivers,What is thy Goal..
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