Theniceguy247
Hey, your book is actually really interesting and has potential to be something big. Here's a piece of advice, if you want your story to be really good and memorable, please don't copy from what you remember of Savior of CHS. Far too many MLP EG harem x male reader stories either take from that story or Prince of CHS and his Princesses. It's really good so far and if you're going to do similar things that Jordan did, try to do it in a new and unique way. Sorry if I'm bothering you, just a fellow MLP EG reader writer trying to help out another.
Theniceguy247
And you're doing good. Trust me, it took me absolutely forever to settle on my current story. And as I've said, I wish you the best of luck as I can tell you are a talented and awesome person. Hope you continue your story, gain more followers and attention, and make even more amazing stories.
BarbaricNovels
@Theniceguy247 I feel I said that in a mean way now that I think about it. I have trouble expressing my feelings in words. I'm trying to say, I really appreciate the advice. With this being my first time writing something like this I'm trying to make mine as unique as I can, it is a bit difficult to not run into the same situation of "Oh, how do we get to this part without making it just a repeat of what others do." But I'm figuring it out. Like I said, I'm getting help from Shadowlight on how to make my stuff good, and even running some stuff by him to think if my ideas are good or not. But that's for that, I trying real hard to make something people can enjoy and still be original
Theniceguy247
Alright, I'm just making sure because as I've said, far too many MLP EG x male reader stories take a wee bit too much from the original amazing stories. Your idea is absolutely amazing and I want your story to have its own identity. I wish you the best of luck with your story as I believe that it's going to be amazing.