UpQuark360

Hello! Just want to say that I'm really impressed at how well you're doing with your story - I haven't read it yet (though I am definitely planning to) but it's amazing how much you've mangaged to write when you said its your first book and you started it after me, yet you've written like 1000x more! Well done!

BartEggermont

thanks Elise
          
          i replied on the neon lights thread,
          
          i have also started following you already :-)
          
          like the work just please if you have time try to make the suggested changes, i know its not easy to do what i wanted but the atmosphere is completely right already