BeanieBitch

Sup my peeps

itzalpacas

Hey ma friend, you seem cool so imma follow you :3

BeanieBitch

I am not sociaally awkward i am just awkward
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itzalpacas

@itzalpacas yay other socially awkward people 
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Califia

Hey Tyke~~Thanx for choosing to follow me. You won't be disappointed. Something tells me you will like my books "The Tattooed Princess" and "Dominance Factor"
          Enjoy!
          ~~Califia
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/87854945-dominance-factor-wattys2017
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/18310366-the-tattooed-princess

Califia

@BeanieBitch ~~Thanx for the constructive criticism. I'm usually pretty careful with mechanics such as tense---so in order for me to get the full understanding of your critique, please send me here or in PM a sample of a sentence or two where you feel my choice of tense interferes with the impact of the work. Please mention the work, as well. I ask this as I do want to improve the effectiveness of my writing where ever possible. Your's is the first mention of this I have had in 3 years and 23 works on Wattpad.
            
            ~~Califia
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BeanieBitch

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@Califia your an amazing writer but here's some advice; don't be thoughtful be mindful ad in the present instead of then, it would make your writing fan-fucking-tastic. Hope you listen to this because if writing does not flow then maybe try other things but if you come back to writing then it is your true colors. Love BeanieBitch   
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