BiancaSantana880

Should I retire from writing I need honesty are my stories still good like they used to

OscarLycaon

@BiancaSantana880 Your stories are really great, if you retire, i'll be sad.
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WillDeBernardoHoule

@BiancaSantana880 no don't do that i wish to see the bad guys in: f1 the movie
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SnowAngel76

@BiancaSantana880 Never, you should never retire!
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AlicornNorth

Chapter Title: A Protective Father
          
          In Kaiya's bedroom, She was sitting on her bed looking through the gift basket that iris and oliver 
          Gave her an apology for what happened at Bee's party, she was going through it with Daydream her pet nevermoors dragon asleep on her bed in smaller form, just then her door swing open she looked up to see a very concerned Asmodues as he gives off a fierce aura that scream protective dad, 
          Kaiya looks at him with confusion, Kaiya: Uh, Hey Ozzie is everything ok? 
          Asmodues didn't say anything just sit on the oversized bed with her, Asmodues:(protective) we got to talk baby
          Kaiya: about what? Asmodues: Listen sweetheart in hell, there are certain types of people you need to stay away from. Like Creeps, Psychopaths, Mafia gangs, 
          And Especially Creeps who are predators towards children, and this Oliver boy is one of those creeps 
          Kaiya: I don't think I get what you're talking about I told you Oliver is just Iris's business partner that's all
          He was nice to me at Fushica's 
          Asmodues:(suspicious) ok, he didn't do anything inappropriate or make you feel uncomfortable right? 
          Kaiya: No? Why, 
          Asmodues took a deep breath before he stood up 
          And walk to the door, 
          Kaiya: Where are you going ozzie? 
          Asmodues:(serious) me and oliver are to have a very intense conversation about his intentions with you and iris, he spoke with protection and anger in his voice,
          Kaiya:(eyes widen) That really isn't necessary Ozzie really! 
          But Ozzie didn't listen as his protective dad instincts were going off as he marches to the limo as kaiya followed him, 
          Kaiya: Ozzy! No, 
          The scene changes to iris's penthouse in the living room where Iris and Oliver were flirting with each other in a romantic way on the couch as iris run her fingers his white hair, 
          Outside of the penthouse Ozzy's limo pull up to the penthouse with Asmodues came out with a expression of fatherly protectiveness as kaiya stepped out to in panic, 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          

AlicornNorth

Iris grabbed her dad's arm, 
            Iris: dad it was our idea to send her the basket as an apology, it's My fault for hiring Dan and Henry in the first place, I didn't know that they were her tormenters, I felt really bad for those two idiots for attacking her at bee's party so we thought sent her a gift basket to make up for it, just put him down 
            Asmodues:(realized) Oh, Crap sorry
            He said putting Oliver down 
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AlicornNorth

Iris: Dad what the hell are you doing?!
            Asmodues: How old are you? 40?! 
            Oliver:(awkwardly darting his eyes) Uh, I'm 16, 
            Asmodues: you stay away from my sugarplum, she's just a sweet, innocent little girl, who do you think you are sending her a gift basket like you know her,
            
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AlicornNorth

After Kaiya got the apology gift basket from iris and her secret boyfriend Oliver, Asmodues goes into Protective dad mode thinking Oliver was some kinda child predator because he was iris's brand figure and he sent kaiya a gift basket 

AlicornNorth

You ok

AlicornNorth

@AlicornNorth it's ok I hate Mondays too they are the worst
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BiancaSantana880

Sorry I hate Monday my stepmom is off and we needed to clean up the house and she can be a dictator she and dad getting on my case giving me a hard time 
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AlicornNorth

Full Name: Lisa Willer 
          
          Nicknames: Lisa(by Claire)
          Wasp face
          Pollen brain(both by kaiya)
          
          Home: Manhattan, New York, Earth(formerly)
          Hell
          
          Occupation: Elementary School Student(formerly)
          
          Age: 8-9
          
          Nationality: Afro-caribbean 
          
          Skin-color: Dark brown(formerly)
          Golden-yellow 
          
          Hair-color: Blackish-blue(formerly)
          Red-orange
          
          Eye-color: periwinkle blue(formerly) 
          Royal blue Sclera with coral pink irises 
          
          Species: Human(formerly)
          Sinner Demon 
          
          Family: Unnamed Parents 
          
          Personality: Tomboyish, Competitive, irresponsible,  Ambitious, irritable, inconsiderate, Carefree, 
          Driven, Moody, Self-absorbed, Disobedient, 
          Beastly, Naughty, Sporty, Wily, Rowdy, Crafty, 
          Hard-headed, Sharp-tongued, Silly, Chill, Realistic, 
          Backstabbing, Rambunctious,
          
          Likes: Sports, Playing Dress up, Candy, Halloween, 
          Pop music, Hip hop music, Boba tea, Soccer, Hockey, 
          Popularity, Fireworks, ham and pineapple pizza, 
          Her best friend Claire, Super Mario, Bullying, 
          Giraffes,
          
          Dislikes: Kaiya, being unpopular, The color pink, 
          Girly things, Unicorns, Breaking Stuff, Iris's Wrath 
          Getting caught,
          
          Abilities: Demonic physiology 
          Bee physiology 
          Flight(via wings) 
          
          VA: Tara Strong 
          
          
          

AlicornNorth

Chapter Title: A Banquet Massacre 
          
          A Flashback opened to a city called Lillie, a hustle and bustle city, the camera pan down on a Gorgeous mansion that belongs to the la' freyas, as the guests walk into the mansion(https://pin.it/2n4VnDATv) completely oblivious to the danger that was coming, on the rooftop of the mansion 
          Two figures cloak in the shadows, a figure of a woman in black cloak with glowing red eyes(https://pin.it/mYl6y2acG) Samadhi demonica, beside her was a towering dragon figure(https://pin.it/2HwqdDWNb) her lover Satan
          As she's coldly watching the humans, 
          Satan: so my fire ruby what's the plan? 
          Samadhi: Just follow my lead love
          The scene changes to the ballroom(https://pin.it/1tbgrTXz2) everyone was dancing, eating, mingling with each other, 
          As a man and a woman appears on the stairs case to greet everyone, the man named was Gabriel La' freyas next to him was his wife Lila la' freyas 
          Gabriel spoke in a aristocrat voice to his guests, 
          Welcome one and all to our grand Banquet we hope you have a wonderful time to tonight
          

AlicornNorth

The scene fast forward to the present day in the wrath ring in Satan castle he was cleaning the trophy he won from lava crushers and placed it on the shelf, He looked at it with pride and he frowned at the thought of how misses Samadhi demonica never be able to see her again as he silently shed a tear from his eyes, then his therapist yorgit appears he quickly wiped his tears,
            Yorgit: Uh, Satan I hate to interrupt your.... brooding moment but you have another pack day 
            Satan put on his usual gruff tough guy act, 
            Satan: oh right let's get on it, 
            He knows he misses her, and he couldn't ignore that feeling 
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AlicornNorth

Samadhi demonica felt nothing for the vermin she called her parents, she teleports back to the rooftop of the mansion,
            Samadhi looked at Satan with a cold look, 
            Samadhi: Burn it to the ground, my love 
            Satan:(smirk) it will be my pleasure Fire ruby, 
            With snapped of his fingers use his fire magic to set fire to manison and everyone in it as the humans scream for help but to no avail, 
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AlicornNorth

In my version of the mastermind episode Samadhi possessed kaiya to save Stolas from getting his powers taken away by her to destroy the golden rings which shocked the court as she revealed herself to all of the seven rings of hell,

BiancaSantana880

Can we add that Iris defends Blitzo since she’s friends with him
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GlitteryHearts_123

          
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BiancaSantana880

Thank you for sharing
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AlicornNorth

I sent you the chapter where kaiya got the gift basket 

AlicornNorth

@AlicornNorth I saw it and I love it
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BiancaSantana880

I’m working on it
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