@BigEyedWonder
Am I right to assume that your phone fell on your face again? xd
Because that notif took me to authors note and not the supposed chapter LOOOOL
@JK-Hyde Yes ur right ಥ‿ಥ The corner edge of my phone hit my nose bridge tho and now I have a tiny bruise there that looks like a pimple :')
I just binged through the avatar james cameron comics and now i have so much I want to reference in my fanfic loool ಥ‿ಥ
I now definitely NEED to write a scene about Neteyam telling Hiraya of his experience in fighting the RDA in outerspace XD
He deserves to have scene where he flexes on his girl even a little ᕙ(☉ਊ☉)ᕗ
but fr tho, they need to have bonded more in my book 1 to build their friendship better before falling in love and i totally skimmed over that bonding and conversation part ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
UGH so much to writeeee!
@JK-Hyde Nahh girly I'm too broke to buy copies tho I certainly wish I could T^T I just read them for free online. I made an account on batcave .biz and read it there. Altho its not totally complete there. They don't have the very first avatar comic the Avatar: Brothers which is about Jake's bond with his twin brother and they're also missing volume 5 out 6 of So'lek's comics. But everything is still pretty readable and understandable. There's so much on the comics that Avatar fans srsly NEED to know about. So much crucial info and character nuances to be learned before writing a fanfic that I'm facepalming myself for not reading them early AAAA
@BigEyedWonder I'm having a hard time picturing the Na'vi being astronauts xd Where did you read the comics? Did you buy physical copies?
Heya ppl! I'm curious; how do u guys avoid wattpad ads when reading? do u guys just read on browser?
@pplryu_ Lol same @BigEyedWonder browser is the best way. Wattpad can go fvck themselves with their app ads xd
@BigEyedWonder I read it in my browser just like it's AO3 HAHA—you can also download chapters that way and read them offline
im in hongkong disneyland rn u guys and im afraid the summer heat beat the enjoyment out of it
T^T
@BigEyedWonder OMG POOR PENNY
omg guys ignore that publish notif from book 1 my phone just fell on my face again while typing
@Amariberry HAHAHA tbh my phone rarely falls on my face bcos it usually falls on Penny's instead ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`) But fr tho its hard typing while breastfeeding ;-;
Ok guys, so I'm back—but also, not really.
Because I'm busy moving houses, prepping for an upcoming flight to Hong Kong, and reading Tsaheylu Between Worlds to learn from Dushie's writing style, sooo updates are still on hold.
I've figured out what I lack in my writing so I've been doing revisions. I’ve only rewritten Book 1's Prologue so far, but I intend to rewrite all chapters eventually. Don't worry, the plot will stay exactly the same—you won't need to re-read anything. I just can't stand that my old, cliché, beginner writing is still being actively read. I need to add more character voice and imagery; my old style was too plot-driven and screenplay-like, failing to deliver the emotional depth, reactional logic, and ambiance I wanted you to feel.
Also, I'm sorry, but I failed my Author's Note promise in Book 1: my OC still IS a Mary Sue. I didn't write her PTSD realistically enough; she acts too tuffgirl, too teen-normal, and is just trauma-proof. I also need to add a chapter or maybe just put in details and thought-process paragraphs in the existing chaps addressing Hiraya's conflicted dilemma about Neteyam in Book 1. Considering her traumatic past with Kuro—whose faceclaim is Neteyam as a Mangkwan—the psychological impact of that parallel shouldn't have been ignored. Kuro's character idea only occurred to me after Book 1, but that trauma response still needs to have been there to foreshadow his Book 2 reveal. Plus, we all just nodded along at the part where she survived months alone in the wild before meeting Neteyam. I need to make it make sense.
There's so much to fix that it literally gnaws at me at night like head lice (ew). I can't focus on continuing Book 4 yet, so it will remain on hiatus until I clear these schizophrenic notifs out of my head.
Anyway, thank you all for your endless support! And to my new readers and followers, welcome to this little community we have here. I hope Hiraya's story leaves an impression on you. TYSM!♡
@royamacire EYYYY ROYAMACIRE GIRLYYY I MISSED UUU (づ￣ ³￣)づ Also thank u so much for the kind words and also for dropping by here ilysmmm
take your time! dwdw ill still be here supporting <3 ill be rereading your stories in the meantime
things r not ok at home lately
im putting book 4 on hiatus
im sorry everyone
@IlLuMiThEaSsAsSiN Thank you so much! I'm happy to know you're enjoying the series❤️ I appreciate your kind words @JK-Hyde lmao don't worry! i feel the same actually :') Honestly, all i want to do is just write and be left alone to write, but its been hard to find the time to do so lately bcos of certain events coming up that i have to prepare for this end of May and for the month of June. But i promise you, as soon as my schedule clears up again, i will be writing nonstop. I'm just the same as you; I feel the heartache in the wait for the next chapters too. Although I know I'm the author and i alrdy know the ending to my series lol, im still a reader to my own work, and i definitely feel the frustration u have at reaching the last available chapter of an unfinished story :') but anyway, thank you for the support!
@BigEyedWonder NOOO NO HIATUS WAAAH T~T Just kidding though, I know mental health matters and you are every bit of deserving of the break you're having right now ❤️ But I just finished through what's available of your 4th volume and it's too beautiful and I just need to read more that I want to cry T~T. Literally, just a genuine compliment, please don't take any pressure. I can wait for your return. Your writing is worth the wait though the waiting is heartache :')
@BigEyedWonder No problem, my love! I'm glad things are getting better for you! I made it to the third book now, lol! Love it so far, good job, Darling!!
update book 4 plsss?
@DianaDrillo yes im on it girl Im halfway done with chap 9 its still only 2k words ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
guys just a heads up, im gonna be posting my works on AO3 too so i wont be posting a new chapter today and tomorrow for book 4 until i finally sort things out
pls be patient guys ilysm
imma be quick and obsessive about it so u guys get a book 4 update asap
mwamwaa~
@KDBloomfield yes like omg girl I CRIEEED I cried like a whining child to my partner about my inferiority complex so bad after reading dushie's chapter 1 ಥ‿ಥ Also no prob girly! U deserve the praise ( ꈍᴗꈍ) plus im srsly waiting for another chap from LDB when are u dropping it? ಥ‿ಥ
@BigEyedWonder aaahhh!! tysm for the sweet comments!!! and yes! ik you’d love Dushie’s fic!! lol, you’re not the only one who feels outclassed by their writing. i swear it’s like comparing a fridge drawing next to the mona lisa or something XD