Bioshockgrl

added chapter 2 for S-59 also temporarily removed a dragons heart and parasite since i havent been working on them and wont be able to work on them for a long while, they will return eventually so dont fret!

Bioshockgrl

OK UPDATE TIME: (yes I know you all are waiting on snakes bride chapters, im still trying to deal with writers block on that one) 
          
          but im the meantime I have news for Subject-59, because this story/series is now contracted to Galatea, ive started re-writing the story to add more content, depth, plot, and to make it just easier to read/ understand. 
          
          on that note ill be taking down all the old (current )chapters next week (March 16-20) and start slowly re-releasing the new re-rwitten versions for you all to read before the book is gone-gone and to get some feedback on them! 
          
          for those of you who have already read it, I beg of you to read again and give me your thoughts-- these new chapters will also include more 18+ content as well~ ill be posting the 1st re-written chapter soon so please check it out!!!

ChristinaTanguma1

Congrats to you! Wish you were not taking this awesome book to the other website! You’re an awesome writer but love reading for free on Watty! 
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Anna92231

Just finished The captains treasure on Galatea! Always a pleasure to read your work! The story, the characters and the spice- chefs  
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EmmaBookLover92

Hi ! Came across your book Last to Fall on Galatea recently and started to read it there , then found it also here on wattpad and comparing the two versions they have some differences? 
          May i please ask which one is the correct one? Xx
          
          Im dying to read it ! Thanks

Bioshockgrl

@EmmaBookLover92  hopefully yes there's a list for the series both in the book and on my wall
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EmmaBookLover92

Is this new version going to be the final one?
            Also is there a reading order for this couple? As i know that the second book its an alternate universe. Thanks so much xx 
            
            Im on chapter 20 xx
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Bioshockgrl

@EmmaBookLover92 the version here on wattpad and on inkitt are newer they are a re-written version while Galatea is the original old one
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Bioshockgrl

while I try to figure out a way to continue snakes bride--- question for all you alien/sci-fi and monster lovers.
          
          for a (temporary) physical ability/appearance  on a alien male character what would you all be more interested in?
          
          -Tail (one or multiple) 
          
          -tentacles (multiple ofc)
          
          -claws/sharp armor-like appendages(not like clawed hands)
          
          -wings (feel like this is overused sometimes but will still consider it)
          
          -a beast form(bipedal or quadripedal)
          
          -extra arms (probably just 4)
          
          -other options?? (comment ideas)
          
          please let me know what you guys would be interested to see! if you like multiple then feel free to choose multiple! ive had an idea for another sci-fi story that ive been saving for a while now, and am just trying to create a character design for the alien species. the MMC is the alien in this one.
          
          
          
          
          
          

MistressZuzi

@Bioshockgrl Well as @Dulcifer666 said, mouths, kissable ones are a must. Then long tongues, tail, tentacles, claws, extra arms would be interesting also. A beast temporary form no matter the form or a biological armour that forms when needed. Humm another erogen zone/organ beside the usual third leg... hahaha 
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Dulcifer666

@Bioshockgrl Personally, I like those bipedal, humanoid-looking characters; I like that they have mouths. I've read stories about Yautja; they're manly and strong, possessive and territorial, very protective of their female mates, but you can't kiss them! It's impossible! Haha.
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Bioshockgrl

sorry guys i think im stuck on snakes bride progression, not quite sure how to continue forward with the story, might be another while for a update, idk :')

AthenaPatrick

@Bioshockgrl dont forget to make an invirment that creates bordom but you can still wright i find that helps. wrightings hard
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Bioshockgrl

@Bioshockgrl I wish I could do that I do have outer ideas but most of this stuff i come up with as I write
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VeronicaBetancourt23

@Bioshockgrl Please take all time. Do you have note apps? Like me? I always prepare to think good ideas, plan to perfect sentences and grammar for my future stories, write in notes in apps before they are ready to publish. Do you think?
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Bioshockgrl

OK FINALLY FINISHED. thank you all for being patient with updates i know yall have been waiting for snakes bride, but i had a deadline to finish the LTF re-writes so i didnt have time ti work on snakes bride at all. i had hoped to finish ltf last week but 12 chapters turned into 18 because i cant seem to simplify my damn writing , lol...   but now that thats done i can spend some more time working on snakes bride, that being said tho--- i am gonna warn yall i am gonna have to re-write subject-59 and spiders bride as well soon because i got a contract offer for both series so they will be headed to galatea! (aproximately 3-4 months from now) so im gonna try and get a head start by working on those in my spare time while focusing on snakes bride, ill try to get a chapter released this week but no guarantees since it often takes me 1  1/2  or 2 days per chapter.  also  thank you to anyone re-reading LTF  and giving feedback! it helps a ton for me to know what changes are good or bad!

MarvelWhoreXst

Ah just finished it and love it!! Your work is amazing gonna start the second part 
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Arty_Arjay

@Bioshockgrl Oh I see! That's pretty nice! Inkitt seems like a good place for authors? Thanks for sharing btw :)
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