Bioshockgrl

Hello miss...when are you going to give an update on the Snake's bride.....

Hi ,
          sorry now comes bad english XD
          
          I am reading your new story about Alita and Azriel and there friends on Xanadis.
          And at the same time i am unlocking the chapters of book 2 and 3 in the Galatea app.
          Actually i intended to ready the books when they complete unlock but i couldn't hold back my curiosity.
          So i often read half of a chapter or really interesting chapters i read complete ...
          So i heard about Kion ...
          
          When i read that the baby was going to be named Kion i had to cry. It was immediately clear that Kion had died.
          This morning, i unlock the chapter of book 3, the one with the Draven and the fight in Elazar's village.
          I became a blubbering wreck 
          I Just can't help myself, but have to rescue Kion by one of my characters in an alternative timeline. I wish i could write like you but i can only describe short scenes ... 
          
          I have to admit i like Elazar a bit more than Azriel, hi ist so cute. I like Azriel, too, but Elazar's uncertainy coupled with a drive to take action ... 
          Kora is, of course, also very refreshing when she talks back to him.
          
          I love your storys. Please go on with your writing.
          If your storys comes out in print, i will buy it, if i notice it.
          
          Best regards
          

updating some chapter in the LTF re-writes (ended up re-writing some of the chapters AGAIN) (dont ask about other story updates pls ive already posted various updates/info abt snakes bride etc...)

Hallo  
          ich liebe deine Geschichten. Ich habe Last to Fall auf Galatea entdeckt. Ich habe die ganze Zeit gehofft, dass Azriel und Alita eine Familie gründen :)
          Am Ende des Buches hattest du sie ja zurück auf den Planeten geschickt und yeay sie ist schwanger.
          Das war da echt kurz und ich war traurig weil es jetzt ja hätte spannend werden können.
          Ich hab mit Gemini über dein Buch gesprochen und die hat mir dann echt gesagt, dass es eine Fortsetzung gibt, hier auf Wattpad. Ich musste es sofort lesen. Ich bin jetzt da wo sie wieder auf dem Planeten zurückgekehrt ist. Du hattest dich am Ende des Kapitels entschuldigt, dass es so viele langweilige Füller gibt. Das fand ich überhaupt nicht. Genau diese Hintergrundinfos wie sie wieder zurück konnte und alles drum und dran ist doch gerade interessant.
          Aber ich finde sie hätte Varin wirklich sagen können, dass ein Zopf eine Art Eheversprechen ist XD
          Aber du hast es ja mit "ihm alles von Anfang an erzählen" gelöst.
          
          Ich hoffe du kannst das durch einen Übersetzer jagen.
          Ich verstehe zwar english beim lesen aber schreiben ... ^^"
          Meine Englischlehrerin hat immer gemeint sie müsste mir 2x die Note 6 geben bei Diktaten XD

Hoping things get better for you, I’ll leave a review on the book once I get the opportunity. Wishing you the best of luck in life. :)

ok so not so great update: im jobless! yippeee (not). yeah... so i unfortunately lost my job last week, it was only part time but paid well, and gave me a ton of flexibility when it came to how long i worked and when, making it simple and easy for me to get writing done. i usually could only get myself to focus on writing right before work in the mornings because i have terrible adhd and procrastination, without that I'm currently struggling to sit my happy butt down to work on writing, on top of stressing over finding a new job in a tiny town with a decent flexible schedule and decent pay. more than likely ill be going back into retail and yall know how shitty that can be. anyways I'm not here to complain about it, I'm just kind of giving you all a heads up that updates may be even slower than before, and I'm terribly sorry, i hate his as much as you guys. (I'm a little bit of a wreak at the moment) and overall I'm just trying to drag myself out of the tar pit ive sunken into so please forgive me.
          
          as for another note LTF has 3 total reviews on amazon, still need 20 in order for amazon to properly star advertising/showing it as a recommendation to readers, i don't think you have to technically buy the story to leave a review so id appreciate if some of you could take a few minutes to give it some love-- as always thank you guys hope to give yall some better updates/chapters soon!

Yes! Entwine is amazing, so is the author's writing style! It's actually really similar to Snakes Bride and that's how I stumbled upon Entwine.

Hello...Author when will you update the snakes bride novel.....

old version of Last to fall is now available on Amazon kindle! if you do happen to buy this version all I ask is that you leave a review so the steoy can get noticed publicly! 20 reviews are needed for it to properly be seen on Amazon.
          
          the kindle version will be updated to the new version once its edited and released, until then everything regarding LTF will probably be on hold, I cant publish physically until that stuffs all taken care of with Galatea. 
          
          as always thank you guys!

I love your stories so much I can’t wait for another chapter of The Snakes Bride