Hello!!
If you don't remember who I am you filled out a form for a review in my Book Review shop for well a book review. This happened a few months ago and I know you completed the payment, but I I just want to apologize for how much time I'm taking to review your story.
I've been very busy and I still am busy so I won't be able to make a chapter in my shop and review your story in depth. However because I know you did the payment and because I feel bad for making you wait so long, I'm willing to review your 5 chapters by inline commenting on your story instead.
If you won't mind me reviewing your book via comments please inform me so I can get to it as soon as possible :)
-Esmer