Blazeburn006

Well, This is mostly going to be a general up for my writing. 
          	
          	First of all to those have taken the time to read Flames Fate at all where it has been 1 chapter for all of what I have shared so far you have my deepest thanks for taking the time to look at it. 
          	
          	As I wrote this there were some aspects I wanted to do better from adding more stuff earlier on, adjusting some of the character interaction and even remove some of the unneeded characters. So while I plan more of what I want to do with a few arc/story sections I want to do, I will mostly be putting a pause on it so I can make these adjustments, plus work on a little short side story with Maryan so I have something help give me something else to work on.
          	
          	Again this is a big thank you to anyone who happens to read it, to those who did read it and to those who want to read it. I don't ask for likes to comments, mostly because still he biggest thanks is that people read this.

Blazeburn006

Well, This is mostly going to be a general up for my writing. 
          
          First of all to those have taken the time to read Flames Fate at all where it has been 1 chapter for all of what I have shared so far you have my deepest thanks for taking the time to look at it. 
          
          As I wrote this there were some aspects I wanted to do better from adding more stuff earlier on, adjusting some of the character interaction and even remove some of the unneeded characters. So while I plan more of what I want to do with a few arc/story sections I want to do, I will mostly be putting a pause on it so I can make these adjustments, plus work on a little short side story with Maryan so I have something help give me something else to work on.
          
          Again this is a big thank you to anyone who happens to read it, to those who did read it and to those who want to read it. I don't ask for likes to comments, mostly because still he biggest thanks is that people read this.

Blazeburn006

To anyone who has read chapter 14. You have my deepest apolizes I have no idea how so many spelling erros got past me. 
          
          Please if any of you give it another look i have spend the past few hours going through it to try and fix these errors.
          
          And again I am sorry for this over sight, lets just say I have had my hands very full this year.

Blazeburn006

Well I went tthrough again and made a slight change, nothing major just a date. Red's birthday has gone from Aug 12th to Aug 6th.
          
          Yeah nothing major just a simple change that dosent really do much other then bring some events a little closer together

Blazeburn006

Ok for those who it may concern, I did an Edit to adjust the scenes with Raiden in ch4 Blood Eye. I didn’t like how it had it and made the ch age beicase at the time I thought it was fine but after reading it and the idea I had for the character I adjust it.
          
          Please feedback on it would be appreciated and sorry for the late notice if this is an inconvenience