BlitzenBugatti

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My story has some room for improvement. Because the chapter I liked the most was 
          	"His Starvation" (The idea of Mario going so insane, he decides to eat Callie was a cool idea. Although Callie still surviving even with some of her innards being torn out was just due to laziness). 
          	With my least favorite being a tie between 
          	"His Bad Time: Part Two" (with it being Sans and Marie using Elemental Flowers even though that makes No fucking sense, whatsoever), 
          	and "His Traitorous Intentions" (with that being multiple details throughout the story like Mickey getting mad at Mario because he killed his friends without him, or Minnie making out with Pete. That doesn't sound very 1930's). 
          	With everything else being mid at best. By the way, the Mario x Meggy thing was me thinking it would make the story more emotional. It just made it cringe because no one like the Mario x Meggy ship, to my knowledge at least.
          	
          	And I STILL do not know how I should continue this. Maybe YOU guys might have an idea or multiple. Maybe.

DarknessLamby02

Hello BlitzenBugatti it's been a while

BlitzenBugatti

@DecepticonKing001 Too late. I've given up on that book. You can give it a shot if you want.
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DarknessLamby02

@BlitzenBugatti have you watched the latest smg4 video if meggy dies in WOTFI 2024 could you made a story when mario snapped and betrays smg4, luigi, his friends and Nintendo what do you think?
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BlitzenBugatti

this message may be offensive
My story has some room for improvement. Because the chapter I liked the most was 
          "His Starvation" (The idea of Mario going so insane, he decides to eat Callie was a cool idea. Although Callie still surviving even with some of her innards being torn out was just due to laziness). 
          With my least favorite being a tie between 
          "His Bad Time: Part Two" (with it being Sans and Marie using Elemental Flowers even though that makes No fucking sense, whatsoever), 
          and "His Traitorous Intentions" (with that being multiple details throughout the story like Mickey getting mad at Mario because he killed his friends without him, or Minnie making out with Pete. That doesn't sound very 1930's). 
          With everything else being mid at best. By the way, the Mario x Meggy thing was me thinking it would make the story more emotional. It just made it cringe because no one like the Mario x Meggy ship, to my knowledge at least.
          
          And I STILL do not know how I should continue this. Maybe YOU guys might have an idea or multiple. Maybe.