BlobbyCentral

Heya! I have finally rewrote and edited Forsaken by Power, now titled Forsake my Blood!
          	
          	In the Forsaken Series’s dystopia, people born with powers are Forsaken from society and murdered every four years in the Olympic Hunt. This is where three old friends meet again after two years. A Forsaken City leader and rebel. A Hunter elite dedicated to killing Forsaken. And a Muzzle used as a propaganda machine against Forsaken. There’s violence, romance, humour and gut wrenching emotions.
          	
          	If this sounds like your thing! Give it a try!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/397723479?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

eleanorkennedy14

@BlobbyCentral AH I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE BOOK HERE!
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BlobbyCentral

Heya! I have finally rewrote and edited Forsaken by Power, now titled Forsake my Blood!
          
          In the Forsaken Series’s dystopia, people born with powers are Forsaken from society and murdered every four years in the Olympic Hunt. This is where three old friends meet again after two years. A Forsaken City leader and rebel. A Hunter elite dedicated to killing Forsaken. And a Muzzle used as a propaganda machine against Forsaken. There’s violence, romance, humour and gut wrenching emotions.
          
          If this sounds like your thing! Give it a try!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/397723479?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

eleanorkennedy14

@BlobbyCentral AH I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE BOOK HERE!
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exLyrical

Your about me is gold xD

exLyrical

And that, I daresay, ought to be a fact~
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Annalisadonkor

@BlobbyCentral I can see haha
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BlobbyCentral

@exLyrical @annalisadonkor what can i say? i'm pretty cool
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BlobbyCentral

Does anyone have tips for editing a manuscript? I'm editing Forsaken by Power rn and going through it. Any tips?

eleanorkennedy14

@BlobbyCentral I find it helpful to attack the chapters that are going to be the most work first. Then I save the easier ones that need less rewriting later. And I try to make a plan before I start.
            
            Anything in particular you're looking for tips on?
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BlobbyCentral

@eleanorkennedy14 I’m doing more an overhaul revising, rewriting some scenes/chapters. More revising than a total rewrite tho
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eleanorkennedy14

What kind of editing are you doing? An overhaul or just tweaking some small stuff? Just spelling and grammar?
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BlobbyCentral

HEY YOU! STOP WHAT YOURE DOING AND READ ‘The Flames of Revolution’ BY @jamie_saints 
          It’s a really good Wattpad fantasy that’s set in an industrial age world with intense world building+politics, I’m actually going crazy over it
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392056522?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

Jamie_Saints

Thank you so much! To be actually mentioned by someone brought a tear to my eye :D
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