BlobbyCentral

This is @Siya_Jesh ‘s story! She is a pretty cool person who is hopefully reviewing my book. Go check her out!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/353581075?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

MysticMelodywrites

Heyy reader join my new story 
          
          Anshika lives a double life—by day, a woman her family believes is powerless; by night, the mind behind a tech empire and the keeper of a deadly secret. Ekansh is the mafia king who learned too early that love is a weakness and loyalty is bought with fear. When fate drags them together through family pressure, buried promises, and secrets neither can afford to reveal, power collides with power. This is not a love story born from softness—it is forged in control, rage, survival, and two predators forced into the same cage. And cages were never meant to hold panthers.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388711904?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MysticMelodywrites 

Kiam38888888

HIII....Pls read my first chapter of this book and give me an honest reviewww!!!  i am writing this new book and i really need ur help to follow it up since no one ever does, its so sad cause the last one i wrote I dont think anyone liked it because they were just doing ingenuine read for read....i am not done with the first chapter, i just need u to check out what i have done and be VERY honest with me...pls i beg you, support me and help me since no one does ....this is the story, pls check it out.  https://www.wattpad.com/story/404505518-his-favourite-maid-%E2%99%A1

BlobbyCentral

This is @Siya_Jesh ‘s story! She is a pretty cool person who is hopefully reviewing my book. Go check her out!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/353581075?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

BlobbyCentral

Heya! I have finally rewrote and edited Forsaken by Power, now titled Forsake my Blood!
          
          In the Forsaken Series’s dystopia, people born with powers are Forsaken from society and murdered every four years in the Olympic Hunt. This is where three old friends meet again after two years. A Forsaken City leader and rebel. A Hunter elite dedicated to killing Forsaken. And a Muzzle used as a propaganda machine against Forsaken. There’s violence, romance, humour and gut wrenching emotions.
          
          If this sounds like your thing! Give it a try!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/397723479?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BlobbyCentral

eleanorkennedy14

@BlobbyCentral AH I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE BOOK HERE!
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exLyrical

Your about me is gold xD

exLyrical

And that, I daresay, ought to be a fact~
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Hubbubble

Thank you very much for following me! :)

BlobbyCentral

Does anyone have tips for editing a manuscript? I'm editing Forsaken by Power rn and going through it. Any tips?

eleanorkennedy14

@BlobbyCentral I find it helpful to attack the chapters that are going to be the most work first. Then I save the easier ones that need less rewriting later. And I try to make a plan before I start.
            
            Anything in particular you're looking for tips on?
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BlobbyCentral

@eleanorkennedy14 I’m doing more an overhaul revising, rewriting some scenes/chapters. More revising than a total rewrite tho
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eleanorkennedy14

What kind of editing are you doing? An overhaul or just tweaking some small stuff? Just spelling and grammar?
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