BloomBloomix1

Part 2
          	
          	So for the past 4 months, I’ve been heavily editing on my weekends off, and as I’m an essential worker, I have to work through lockdowns. Ya me. I mainly get 1-2 chapters edited per week, correcting errors, changing and adding in new dialogue, and to be honest, the revised version is way better than the original version. So after it’s finished, I’m going to unpublish both Winx Club: The Mysterious Evil and Winx Club: Intergalactic Adventure and Upload the new revised version of Winx Club: The Mysterious Evil at 2-3 chapters per week for everyone to enjoy. Then I’ll republish Intergalactic Adventure and continue from there.
          	
          	Also I’d like to thank a person who wishes to remain anonymous. For telling me that I got the London districts, Police stations, and Police ranks wrong. Silly me was using Military Ranks instead of Police Ranks. I felt so embarrassed. I wanted to put in Real locations, Time Zones and an actual proper timeline with real-life events so that people can relate to and go, ‘oh, I know where that is’. But silly me didn’t do enough research. I’ve learnt my lesson. Hopefully, I can finish this by the end of September, but no promises. Covid- 19 didn’t happen in either none of my stories.
          	
          	Alright, so that’s it from me until September. So goodbye and stay safe during these difficult times, but most importantly, always continue believing in magic.

Lumna10

Take your time but I hope you'll update soon can't wait to see either of your stories continue soon
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BloomBloomix1

Part 2
          
          So for the past 4 months, I’ve been heavily editing on my weekends off, and as I’m an essential worker, I have to work through lockdowns. Ya me. I mainly get 1-2 chapters edited per week, correcting errors, changing and adding in new dialogue, and to be honest, the revised version is way better than the original version. So after it’s finished, I’m going to unpublish both Winx Club: The Mysterious Evil and Winx Club: Intergalactic Adventure and Upload the new revised version of Winx Club: The Mysterious Evil at 2-3 chapters per week for everyone to enjoy. Then I’ll republish Intergalactic Adventure and continue from there.
          
          Also I’d like to thank a person who wishes to remain anonymous. For telling me that I got the London districts, Police stations, and Police ranks wrong. Silly me was using Military Ranks instead of Police Ranks. I felt so embarrassed. I wanted to put in Real locations, Time Zones and an actual proper timeline with real-life events so that people can relate to and go, ‘oh, I know where that is’. But silly me didn’t do enough research. I’ve learnt my lesson. Hopefully, I can finish this by the end of September, but no promises. Covid- 19 didn’t happen in either none of my stories.
          
          Alright, so that’s it from me until September. So goodbye and stay safe during these difficult times, but most importantly, always continue believing in magic.

Lumna10

Take your time but I hope you'll update soon can't wait to see either of your stories continue soon
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BloomBloomix1

Hello everyone. This is part one of two updates.
          
          No, I’m not dead, and no, I’m not back yet. This is an update informing you where I’ve been and how long until the next chapter.
          Okay, so, unfortunately, I’m cancelling WOW: Multiversal Chaos. I love WOW, but I tried to write a version of it with new characters Hailey and Kira Sparks, but after getting to the talents part of the story, I felt like my account was plagerism, effectively a rip off the TV Show. This I’m not proud of, and I deleted those several chapters. I also felt the same way about several chapters of Intergalactic Adventure, but after heavy editing, it felt better. I’ll still continue Intergalactic Adventure as I’ve got awesome plans for new chapters. Introducing Stella’s long lost half brother Apollo and all leading up to a giant plot twist that none of you will see coming. To be honest, I’m not sure when the next chapter will be out, but you should know that almost every weekend, I’m writing, or should I say, heavily editing Winx Club: The Mysterious Evil.
          
          Yes, I’m heavily editing it even after it’s finished. I’ve had difficulties with spelling and grammar for several years now, and Wattpad doesn’t have a spell checker, and mobile phones are terrible for spell checking. So last year, I copied and pasted everything to Microsoft Word, and I found so many mistakes, edited it, changed the wording around 465 pages and over 120,000 words in total, then I published it to the Wattys. But at the start of the year, I decided to download the free version of Grammarly to help me with Intergalactic Adventure, and I found even more mistakes that I corrected. To be honest, the Free version is useless. Basic spell and grammar checker, and that’s it. I brought premium and discovered Mysterious Evil had over 9000 errors. No joke, it actually had 9,024 errors.

BloomBloomix1

Part 2
          
          With all this I'm tired on the weekends from work and my family still hasn't fully recovered from the flooding back in Janurary. We saved the house but insurance company won't do anything right always changing builders or the builders not doing their jobs properly. Its stressing my family out. And writing is one of the things I that makes me happy and I can escape from reality and imagine myself as Bloom, but I want to know what am I doing wrong. Why are all of you not reading the next chapter. Am I going on too much and not getting into the action? Please help me engage more of you.
          
          I might take a break until my life gets back on track. How long I don't know. Thank you for your time to read this.

BloomBloomix1

Part 1
          
          Hi everyone I'm just letting you all know that I'm getting burnt out and I don't know what to do with my stories anymore.
          
          I feel Multiversal Chaos isn't even my work. Its to simular to WOW. I wanted to do multiple books on it and had an amazing idea of a final battle for the first book but I'm not sure if I want continue doing it the same way or start again from scratch?
          
          The first story of Tales from the Multiverse I'm cancelling. I tried writing it last weekend but the idea of the Bargotian Invasion of Earth story was to give people hope in the darkest of times, but it was on Earth and set next year and for Earth to just recovering after COVID-19 and then invaded and cities reduced to rubble and 100 Million people dying. I couldn't do it. My stories have taken dark turns but I couldn't destroy my home planet and writing so much death. Its not me. I'm a caring person. I don't like seeing death.
          
          I changed the whole storyline of Mysterious Evil because I couldn't bare Alexis being in a Coma for a few months so I changed it to a few weeks then a few days. I'm too connected to my characters. I can't kill them. Except killing James as thats always happened to him. Nabu died and I wrote that Helia revived him.
          
          And with Winx Club: Intergalactic Adventure. I'm annoyed with myself creating so many continuity errors. I originally wrote Flora had twins in the timeline then I write she's pregnant with Triplets and she gives birth to twins. James dying on completly different dates and Jane mentioning the dates of her boyfriend James' death is off by 16 months. And I don't know how to fix it. But its a series I do want to keep going. But as this takes place during season 8 I don't want to do the same mistakes I did with WOW: Multiversal Chaos and that worries me. I originally wanted to write a chapter on Roxy's Sirenix quest but I didn't go through with it as I was unsure how to go about it.
          
          End of Part 1

MoonOfSecrets684

Hello!!!
          How are you???
          I'm Moon. I recently just read one of your books. 
          They're soooo good!!!

BloomBloomix1

@AquariusElfDemigod they are close to finding a vaccine. HIV vaccine and Malaria Vaccine killed it in the test tube. Now they need human testing.
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MoonOfSecrets684

@BloomBloomix1 Same. My friends spam me with Can you pleeeease update? (real-life friends) and I'm just like "yep, I'm working on it" (I literally only wrote half a paragraph) :P
            I hope they find a cure
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BloomBloomix1

@AquariusElfDemigod thank you. I'm struggling mentally, this covid-19 is scaring me. So haven't been in the mood to write. But I'll try to update this week.
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noblefan

Are you active on Instagram these days? :3 Thought you saw my message there when I said I updated but it turns out you weren’t 

BloomBloomix1

Don't even know when I'll be in the mindset to update yet.
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BloomBloomix1

@noblefan sorry James but no. Have other things on my mind. Clean up it taking a lot longer than expected. Very tiring and exhausting.
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