Hi Blueby, you're such a good person on Comic Studio, and you seem like a good person to hang out with, your artstyle is decent, and I would join the OSC because of you, But I just don't think you make a very good fanfic, there is some character inaccuracies
° Glassy isn't really much of a whiny girl, she's actually more psychotic, crazy and uncontrollable
° Salami is nice, but not sugary sweet, I would make him a bit more tough like in the show
° Telescope was a little too clumsy in this series, in reality he's actually really careful
° Chip Bag had a bit of a worried personality, when in reality she's actually tomboyish and fearless
° Coconut wasn't much of a jerk, in the actual show, he was the biggest bully of them all
° Flaggy was also easily worried, but in reality, she actually has many positive vibes
other things that are bad about this series
° Half of the episode plots are unusual, they were supposed to be relatable! The only episodes someone would relate to are Episodes 2, 5, 9, 16 and 17
° The grammar is terrible, all this fanfic does is capitalize the first letter of every word
° Lack of interesting moments, I bet everyone who read this except for Sapphire were bored like heck and that explains the lack of likes, this needs more moments that are Awesome, Funny, Scary or Heartwarming
Sorry Blueby, but if I were you, I would make this like any other regular cartoon, I don't want you to be extremely hated at all, but that's probably gonna happen more
But saying this to someone I like with a bad fanfic, I would ask them to cancel this and either rewrite it, or start on something new
But then what would Sapphire watch? I would ask her to check out something new that you make
You don't have to cancel or rewrite immediately though, and you don't have to listen to me, I'm just saying that I wasn't interested in this fanfic