So Chapter 2 is epic, btw. Much better than the original version. Though, I wanted to ask, because I'm invested in world building, and witchcraft, would you mind having me as a beta-reader or editor? Also, noticed you kept the Succubi, and Incubi. Here's an interesting fact- Incubi and Succubi are not in fact all male and female respectively. What you call them actually has to do with their preferred position. Incubi lie on top, Succubi go beneath, and Concubi lay beside. Tops, Bottoms, Switches.
