BlurSans

I made a new undertale au book so I hope you guys like it??

AmethystCesarl

Like I said, I like your book. However, you need to fix some things.
          
          One, you need a better book cover. You can get "The Wattpad Covers" app for that. It's easy to use so you shouldn't have a problem with that.
          
          Two, change the rating. You're "censoring" the swears. If it's mature, you can't censor the words. If you change the rating, you should get a much bigger audience than what you have now.
          
          Three, change the mistakes in the chapter from autocorrect. Ok. That is it. Good Luck.

Iavrynn

BLUEBERRY ((again..))

Iavrynn

Thank! Glad you like it!
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BlurSans

@Celestial_Wolfz -looks at the mustard, mumbles and eats it- *THIS IS GOOD!!
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Iavrynn

*hands over a mustard coved taco*
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