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@belaasticsideeye I don't know if I'm going to write another after Confusion but in that story her full powers aren't fully revealed and it's a love triangle. I might write another one but I at least wanna get a bit further with this one first :)

@belaasticsideeye I'm currently writing chapter 34 and I'm posting one every few days. But I honestly have no clue when I'm gonna be done hahaha

@GinnyHarol Thank you, I really appreciate this. I’ll keep your advice in mind and once again thanks for your time :)

Here are my thoughts:
            Overall, you have a very good writing style and I really like it. However, you at narrating a bit too much instead of giving the text personality, perspective and character. To do this, add more thoughts, maintain other character’s personality’s structure, write from others perspective too.
            
            Also, I feel like y/n is a bit too bold and one of the best ways to attract readers is making y/n relatable and likable. So maybe make the character more balanced.
            
            For the romance part, they start liking each other pretty quick. And to make it more interesting I’d recommend making them interested in each other but they are conflicted with their own emotions and write pinpoint events that help them realize their feelings.
            
            Right now I want to say that just because I am suggesting things or telling you my opinion on what you can make better, it doesn’t mean it isn’t great. There’s always as many things that can go better as things that are as good as they get.
            
            Here are some exercises to improve your writing: Write a list of your main characters and list things about them (personality traits, feelings, perspectives, thoughts, etc.). Find a few songs that describe your writing, as if they followed the ploy exactly and inspire yourself through those songs. To make characters more balanced list the pros and cons about them and their personalities so they are balanced.
            
            That’s it. Bye :)

@GinnyHarol Sure if I like them I’ll post them and of course I’ll give you credit

@BlazeMeBaby Yippie yey! (Sorry for my childish attitude)
            Basically I write A LOT. Like a lot, lot and I was wondering if I could send you mha one-shots I wrote and you publish them in your account. (You don’t even have to give me credits) I just like helping others out.

@GinnyHarol  Yeah sure go ahead

@ squishy_jisung  thank yoy for making it, it's really good❤❤