BreathingPoisonedAir

Someone in my family is so rich they have five spare bedrooms in their house, a shower room that's bigger than my bedroom, walk in closet bigger than my room, earning thousands every week but he still couldn't give his struggling brother any money or buy his children's grandma a present on her birthday. This disgusts me. 

BreathingPoisonedAir

Someone in my family is so rich they have five spare bedrooms in their house, a shower room that's bigger than my bedroom, walk in closet bigger than my room, earning thousands every week but he still couldn't give his struggling brother any money or buy his children's grandma a present on her birthday. This disgusts me. 

delirioussouls

Hello Cherry
          
          I read your story 'Braindead' and it's really good! I love the way you write! 
          
          I was also wondering if  you'd be willing to quickly maybe look over the story on my page (it's only 1 chapter so far) and leave some feedback?
          
          I know it's probably too much to ask, since you're probably already busy writing really good stories and fighting against bullying and other important matters- but I thought I'd give it a try
          
          Anyhow, I totally understand if you don't want to! Have a good day! Xx

BreathingPoisonedAir

 Of course I will! I you took the time to read my story then isn't it my job to repay the favour? I'm really glad you like the way I write and if you would like to be in my story or have any ideas for new plots twists feel free to let me know!
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