@BrentBatteese
Hey, just finished reading the first chapter of your story and i tell you it was great reading your work. I admire your authenticity and as well as you being so poetic in your work. Continue what you are doing.
@bleuvery thank you. I've been a bit busy. I wrote a second "book" been going through a lot so it just came to mind
Jameson's Caskmates... you're a man of good taste!
@gavin_w hey bud i do REALLY appreciate the feedback. I have been constantly rewriting this for years. Infact I originally used this as a lore for my LARPING character back in 2013. So i worked on it little by little until i found this app. I love positive criticism. Thank you again gavin!!
Hi, just took a look at your writing. You're off to a good start! I hope you don't mind, but here are a few of my thoughts. I enjoyed the beginning, but as a reader I would have enjoyed more world building to really grab my interest. I was unsure of the world it was set it, and why people were becoming monsters. I think if you flesh these areas out a little you'll have a great prologue!
