Brie_brie709

@almasaldubai sorry but if you want people to check out your books, you gotta have good grammar

justconsiousthoughts

@Brie_brie709  thank you giving me feedback in how I can improve it. Once I finish the book I'm going to go over all the grammar and mistakes.  I really appreciate your honesty . Once again thank you for critisising my work, not many do, and I promise you I will get my grammar fixed once my work is finished. I'm only 11 going to 12 so I haven't learnt the proper grammar, but I know the basic.
• Reply

Brie_brie709

@almasaldubai sorry but if you want people to check out your books, you gotta have good grammar

justconsiousthoughts

@Brie_brie709  thank you giving me feedback in how I can improve it. Once I finish the book I'm going to go over all the grammar and mistakes.  I really appreciate your honesty . Once again thank you for critisising my work, not many do, and I promise you I will get my grammar fixed once my work is finished. I'm only 11 going to 12 so I haven't learnt the proper grammar, but I know the basic.
• Reply