CHLipton

Hey guys, only had 1 read on the latest instalment of "A mission of consequences" would be fab if i could get some more of you take a look and give me some feedback :)

CHLipton

Hi all, Thanks to all of you who have already read the first 5 chapters of a mission of consequences.  I'm currently on a drive to get some feedback on it so i can work on improving so if you read it  and could leave  a comment on a chapter or two it would be most appreciated and I would be more than happy to return the favour on some of your work.   
          
          If you'd like me to review a chapter or two of your work just drop me a message with which work you'd like me to look at.

CHLipton

Who can they trust? Where will they go? Will Mel ever stop calling the boys idiots? Who knows.  (Probably not) Chapter 5 of a mission of consequences coming soon! If you haven’t read the first 4, catch up before the new instalment.  Don’t forget to leave any comments/feedback you may have.  I’m always delighted to read it and always looking to improved!

CHLipton

Hey everyone, thanks to everyone who has read and voted on my story.  As always if you have any comments, feedback or questions on it please leave a comment or message me.  I really appreciate all feedback to help me improve :) even if it’s just on one chapter or a part of a chapter it’s all appreciated:) thanks for your help x