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I also don't have a way of payment right now so I understand if you can't. ☺️

Hi, I was wondering if you'd give my story a look. I'm still mulling through the details, but it would be nice to have a friendly, but honest person critique my chapters. 
          
          There are two stories and they're interlinked. 
          
          I only have two chapters up for the first one and only one chapter up for the other. 
          If not, that's all good. Ty  

Hi, if your still doing critiques would you mind giving my stories a look? I have two at the moment, and some feedback on either would be greatly appreciated.

can you please check out my book, and (not harshly) critique it and tell me what you love about it ? I would be grateful enough if you read this and I hope you have a splendid rest of your day :))

Hey, would you pls check out my book. I'm need so I need insights. Thanks

hii would you mind giving an honest critic on my book "falling for him"? i would love to improve 

Hi please could you check my story out 
          (Emerald Academy) by @lilchubby26  
          It will really mean a lot to me 
          Thank you 

Hey I'm new and I just posted a book titled O.C.D. And I would like you guys to criticize it for me

You guys okay?

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