C_Critiques

Critic refresh *inactive critics will be deleted 

BennetEliza

Hi, I was wondering if you'd give my story a look. I'm still mulling through the details, but it would be nice to have a friendly, but honest person critique my chapters. 
          
          There are two stories and they're interlinked. 
          
          I only have two chapters up for the first one and only one chapter up for the other. 
          If not, that's all good. Ty  

choco_latefondu

Hey, would you pls check out my book. I'm need so I need insights. Thanks

choco_latefondu

@choco_latefondu it's called 'Falling for the bad girl'
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