AMBROSIA RISING updates and tweaks are all finished! I am fairly confident that I caught everything that needed to be changed, and I also spent a good chunk of time on my laptop with the document just rearranging scenes.
I hope the new changes will bring the story up to a faster pace and increase the characters' drive to act, aaaaand also provide an opportunity for Ami to have a little more agency in what happens to her rather than finding herself dragged along for the ride.