All your stories sound really good! I can't wait till I have time to read all of them! The book I commented on a little bit ago, I think it has a lot of potential to become something amazing. So do your other books as well as far as I'm aware with their summaries. I thought I might as well tell you how good your story was since normally I feel that getting a compliment is a great way to get better (that and reading more, though with your reading lists, I think you got that covered) I don't see anything to criticize at the moment but if I see anything I will tell you so you can fix it or make it more understandable or something. I'm not going to criticize it just to say it sucks or something, but I will tell you if I see any spelling or grammar mistakes!
